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Kadew December 28th, 2017, 12:06 pm
And we're back! Thank you for your patience with hiatus, but it's blessedly over now. Now it's time to dawdle around in Viridian City all over again.

In other exciting news, it's that time of year again: The Nuzlocke Forums Extravaganza! This year Kurukkoo! has been nominated for the categories of "Funniest Comic Run" and "Best Rival in a Comic Run," but there are also a ton of other amazing comics in the running in these and many other categories! Check it out and vote here: http://s7.zetaboards.com/Nuzlocke_Forum/topic/11051386/1
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TheJGamer December 28th, 2017, 1:58 pm
Does Oak not consider that rude
Spirit of Water February 6th, 2018, 11:34 pm
This is a very fun and engaging opening for a nuzlocke. Many I've read automatically make the rival a jerk, so I really like how you've made Blue a competitive friend and Red not automatically perfect. You can tell that they're friends who will undergo a lot of character development as the story progresses. Not to mention you developed their families with individual characters, instead of just I-appear-just-to-kick-you-out. Like Red's mom. I loved how loving a parent Red's mom was.

So, yeah. Kudos to a lovely beginning. Best of luck!